Not one time ever have I stated I was a pro-tuner. Not one time ever have I asked, or received a payment from anyone for tuning services.
I think its worth mentioning that the OP has used V-Dyno less than 5-10 times ever, he just downloaded it Saturday night, and he's still working on taking correct logs. I think everyone owes him some slack in those areas, at least he's taken an interest in learning. Its clear that its still getting a throttle closure, but I already said that. Its also clear that on that run, at least one cylinder had a ign correction. Being as I haven't seen it, I wouldn't tell you. If we are going to micro analyze this one single graph, maybe if he uploads it to datazap and shares it in a link, someone could be constructive, instead of negative, and teach him how to mod his tune slightly for smoother operation.... But then.... That would be helping instead of just complaining.
I'm also willing to submit this tune, and well as the oem made razorlab tune for comparison: for better or worse, that is razor labs tune, its just making way more torque, hense the ECU is shutting the throttle due to load and est torque readings. Of course, anytime you get a throttle closure, its going to the smoothness, and its obviously not a finished deal, more like the start of progress.